Nice that you followed the advice
I would work on the gig image a bit. The photo you in included is great but the text next to it is bearely readable.
When doing your gigs follow this rule: Keep it short and simple. Put a simple headline:
Animal Content from trained veterinary
or something along that lines next to your picture. People will just scan search results and wont even bother trying to decipher that much text on a photo.
If you feel you have more to tell about you, you can allways add documents to your gig.
You should add some sample work, too. If you dont have any atm, just write on something for yourself. Clients want to see your style and skills before booking, especially when dealing with a new account.
I know you want to attract customers but please consider raising prices asap as soon after getting your first sales. You have an academic degree in the niche you want to write for and thats worth something.
EDIT: There is something off with your pricing, too. Why do you charge different amounts for different animals?