You only have 36 minutes of read-time shown in your forum profile. Check out the Tips For Sellers category (forum.fiverr.com/c/Fiverr-Tips/tips-for-sellers/l/top/all?order=views <-- with filters applied). You’ll find hundreds of threads offering advice on a variety of things to consider and/or improve. (Note: Not all advice can apply to all gigs or categories. Be sure you check multiple sources as there are some false tips, even among the top threads.)
It takes a lot of work to make it as a freelancer, so be sure to research and plan accordingly.
“If you fail to plan, you are planning to fail.” (Attributed to Benjamin Franklin)
Specific to your gig, please see (FAQ) point 1:
There are also a bunch of useful links in the (RRD) section.
I would also considering swapping the first and second paragraph of your description. Please see (DES) section, points 2 - 5.
If you have any questions about any of the points in that thread, feel free to ask.