Anyone feel like giving feedback? Much appreciated :)

[blogalog_7]

Hi Everyone,

Have had a couple of gigs up for a month or so, have only had two sales…can anyone see anything wrong with either of my gigs?

Will appreciate honest feedback.

Cheers!

[happyspace]

Hi and welcome blogalog_7 🙂



What do you think about the following?

1. VIDEO
   
   
   
   It would help if you upload a video explaining what you offer. It is said that a video makes Your Gigs 400% more visible in Fiverr search.
   
2. Your GIG DESCRIPTIONS
   
   
   
   It is necessary to add to Your gig descriptions (and videos) that what you offer is “exclusively on Fiverr for $5”
   
   
   
   Generally, it is said that in sales it is best to use as often as possible the words “You’, ‘Your’ instead of ‘I’, ‘My’.
   
3. Your PROOFREADING GIG
   
   
   
   I think Your main image would look more professional without the comic style designed woman (on the right) and
   
   
   
   “Please create new gig for additional word count over 200 words” wouldn’t it be more correct to write : Please order more gigs for additional word count over 200 words. (same for your transcript gig). Or something like:
   
   
   
   up to 200 words = 1 GIG
   
   201-400 words = 2 GIGS
   
   401-600 words = 3 GIGS and so on.
   
4. Your PROFILE INFORMATION
   
   
   
   I think it is OK. Maybe instead of “Professional person”, use “Professional” (plain)? I am not sure on that. You know best, it is Your professional work and it is not my native language.
   
5. Your PROFILE PHOTO
   
   
   
   (which is the same as the one in your transcript gig), the background looks to me a bit messy and the part of your dress shown is a bit too casual. You are very sweet and good looking woman and you look like a person one can trust. But maybe for the kind of gigs you offer it would be better to appear in a more official dress code and general style. Also more daylight would help I think.
   
   *TIP: don’t forget to promote Your gig in teams, forums, your social media outside of Fiverr to bring potential buyers to Your gigs here.
   
   
   
   Hope that helps a bit 🙂
   
   
   
   Wish you all the best with sales on Fiverr!
   
   
   
   P.S. I used the word “Your” and “You” too often to show you by example how Your reader will feel 😉
   

[cardi937]

Yes I would have to agree the main set back you are making is not having a video. People will mainly only view gigs with video to see how you explain your gig and how personable you can be as well. It doesnt have to be a long vid, 30 sec max to explain the key point is all you need if you dont have a good vid editor wevideo is a free online editor that i use and it is great at creating quality product



If you could have a more professional profile picture for your transcript gig just to convey more of what you do



good luck to you