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Business plan order completed successfully

can someone suggest me i any changes or improvements required in my gig so that i can get more orders.
https://www.fiverr.com/zeefinancialist/do-perfect-complete-and-comprehensive-business-plan

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In your gig you just say the topics titles of the document. These tells a buyer nothing about the value you provide. Anyone can make a document that has xyz topics. What makes yours skilled? This needs to be clear. There’s nothing here to indicate the quality or value of your work.

If you’re writing business plans, you especially need to demonstrate that you understand how to build a case for value.

Also, the point of a business plan is to help a client reach a goal. You haven’t oriented your gig around what you actually help a client accomplish, in terms of business objectives.

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thank u so much @humanissocial

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Hi ,
I hope you are doing well ,what happens to you gig it is good but i like to advise you to add some more pictures and plz made an attachment of video it will help you
thanks

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Unlimited revisions are never a good idea.
Fiverr doesn’t permit identical gigs. (TOS)
Fiverr allows three images per gig, maybe add more?
Your gig descriptions need to clearly differentiate what perks are part of which package, rather than listing them all out lumped together.
There are several English errors in this gig, your other gigs, and your profile.

maybe alright now…
zeefina