I took a quick look at your profile:
Your profile image: Wouldn’t change a thing.
Your log line: Fine as is.
Your profile text – note the edits:
Hi, I’m Shauna. I am a singer / songwriter / musician currently working on my first extended play (EP) release! I provide singing, songwriting, voiceovers and photography right here on Fiverr! Feel free to leave me a message!
Unless you’ve received a direct blessing from Fiverr, you should probably remove your YouTube channel from your profile page because reasons. Fiverr wants these links in your Portfolio. The genius behind this rule of Fiverr is that while YOU can see your PORTFOLIO as a SELLER, no one can see your Portfolio as a BUYER unless THEY SAY SO. So once you move your YouTube link to your Portfolio, Buyers won’t be able to see it until maybe someday. I’ve never seen a Seller on Fiverr with a Porfolio link that I could see, but maybe someone has. It’s kind of like a unicorn, or something magical like that.
If you don’t understand, try asking in this thread: Fiverrcast Questions.
All your gigs should have video, 3 images, 2 pdfs, and so on…
I took at look at this gig, because you have a typo in the title:
Should be: “I will record a professional female voiceover for anything”
In general, I stand by my previous advice that you hire a copy writer. Apparently it hasn’t been an issue for you, but you should make clear whether you are willing to sing obscene or pornographic stuff that violates the Fiverr Terms of Service, because you claim that you will do voiceovers for anything.
I get that you don’t offer videos for Buyers of this gig, but you’d still be wise to make a video for this gig of you speaking to the camera, just like the video for your “write and record a song” gig. I checked out your audio sample, and I must tell you it starts with 25 seconds of dead air. You need to re-do that.
You should have 3 images for this gig, preferably of you, rather than stock images.
Hey, given that you’re a lyricist, I’d appreciate your feedback on this thread: Let Me Show You I Can Write A Lyric.
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As a general rule, when I have time to participate in the Fiverr Forum and I notice a request like yours in the “Improve My Gig” section, I am willing and able to look at a Seller’s Profile and one gig one time.
I can give you a better level of assistance if you first work your way through the checklist below. That way, I won’t waste your one turn by advising you to follow items on the checklist. Please study this thread to better appreciate what I’m talking about here.
Here’s a thread discussing a specific example of a Buyer Request for which I created a gig and then asked for help improving that gig via the forum.
Improve My Gig Checklist
Seller Tip Trilogy
3 Top Tips and Tricks
How Do I Attract Buyers to My Gig?
Buyer Requests 1
Buyer Requests 2
Tips for Non-Native English Speakers
Sellers Instructionals from a Techies POV
54 Sales in Our First Month
7 Tips for Upselling
Social Media Gig Marketing
Managing Buyer Expectations
Warning Signs of a Potentially Troublesome Buyer
What URLs Can I Use?
Fiverr Terms of Service
How to Make Millions on Fiverr