georkours Posted August 23, 2018 Share Posted August 23, 2018 Hi there.The title says it all.I want you to be relentess.I believe my gig rocks. In fact, I am surprised it has only 1 order so far. That’s why I want your brutally honest opinion.Here we go: https://www.fiverr.com/georkours/do-effective-no-bs-copywriting-that-convertsThank you,George.P.S- Some of you will be offended by my gig description… but you know it’s the truth! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hanshuber16 Posted August 23, 2018 Share Posted August 23, 2018 Hi,Apart from a couple grammatical errors, it is pretty good.Also,“I am actually a normal guy.”doesn’t really add much to your gig (in my opinion). Consider replacing it with some other sentence about yourself that packs a punch!Best wishes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georkours Posted August 23, 2018 Author Share Posted August 23, 2018 Hi,Apart from a couple grammatical errors, it is pretty good.Also,“I am actually a normal guy.”doesn’t really add much to your gig (in my opinion). Consider replacing it with some other sentence about yourself that packs a punch!Best wishes.Hey thank you! Yeah, I write like a madman, so errors are unavoidable 😛 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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