Could you guys give me some constructive criticism on my latest gig?
How do you prefer to be addressed?
Here is a checklist to help you improve your gigs.
I suggest you add your name to your profile, use a real photo for your profile, add video to your gig, add more gigs in more categories, and make appropriate use of Buyer Requests and social media.
P.S. “I like to computer” is whimsical but probably works against you. I’d suggest re-writing your log line.