Critically analyse my gigs

[shanzapervez]

Hello,
Hope you all good.😊
I am struggling to get an order since 2 months. Take a look at my gigs What is missing?
PS : These gigs are on first page.
https://www.fiverr.com/share/xkepYZ
https://www.fiverr.com/share/3eaNmm

[uk1000]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will design educational, dental, medical, health care flyers

The main gig image says “FAMLIY” instead of “FAMILY”.
The 3rd gig image says “COMAPNY” on the top left.

Gig: I will design unique food, restaurant flyer, food menu, and poster
The 3rd image says “JUCIES” - maybe it should say “JUICES”.

You could add a full stop after “for your restaurant”.

Gig: I will do fashion, beauty salon, hair, skin, spa, gym flyer poster
In the gig description:
It says unlimited revisions but none of the packages have the number of revisions set to unlimited.

[shanzapervez]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will design educational, dental, medical, health care flyers

The main gig image says “FAMLIY” instead of “FAMILY”.

The 3rd gig image says “COMAPNY” on the top left.

Gig: I will design unique food, restaurant flyer, food menu, and poster

The 3rd image says “JUCIES” - maybe it should say “JUICES”.

You could add a full stop after “for your restaurant”.

Gig: I will do fashion, beauty salon, hair, skin, spa, gym flyer poster

In the gig description:

It says unlimited revisions but none of the packages have the number of revisions set to unlimited.

@uk1000 Thank you for highlighting the mistakes. I am going to change them ASAP.

what are your thoughts about the descriptions?

[uk1000]

@uk1000 Thank you for highlighting the mistakes. I am going to change them ASAP.

what are your thoughts about the descriptions?

The descriptions seem mostly okay.

In the dental flyer gig you could reword “has these distinguish features:”.

In “I will design unique food, restaurant flyer, food menu, and poster” - I’m not sure whether it needs so much spacing after the numbers/bullet points in the “WHY ME” section.

In the “I will design educational, dental, medical, health care flyers” gig you could see if adding a blank line before “Why I’m the BEST for you:” might help. Maybe remove some of the blank lines before “What I will need to start:”.

Also in that gig there’s an option for “0 days delivery” in the basic package if you look in the “compare packages” section. I’d change that.

[shanzapervez]

The descriptions seem mostly okay.

In the dental flyer gig you could reword “has these distinguish features:”.

In “I will design unique food, restaurant flyer, food menu, and poster” - I’m not sure whether it needs so much spacing after the numbers/bullet points in the “WHY ME” section.

In the “I will design educational, dental, medical, health care flyers” gig you could see if adding a blank line before “Why I’m the BEST for you:” might help. Maybe remove some of the blank lines before “What I will need to start:”.

Also in that gig there’s an option for “0 days delivery” in the basic package if you look in the “compare packages” section. I’d change that.

Thank you for your time and help?

[mehedy_nadvy]

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