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Critically analyse my gigs

Hello,
Hope you all good.:blush:
I am struggling to get an order since 2 months. Take a look at my gigs What is missing?
PS : These gigs are on first page.
https://www.fiverr.com/share/xkepYZ
https://www.fiverr.com/share/3eaNmm

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These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will design educational, dental, medical, health care flyers

The main gig image says “FAMLIY” instead of “FAMILY”.
The 3rd gig image says “COMAPNY” on the top left.

Gig: I will design unique food, restaurant flyer, food menu, and poster
The 3rd image says “JUCIES” - maybe it should say “JUICES”.

You could add a full stop after “for your restaurant”.

Gig: I will do fashion, beauty salon, hair, skin, spa, gym flyer poster
In the gig description:
It says unlimited revisions but none of the packages have the number of revisions set to unlimited.

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@uk1000 Thank you for highlighting the mistakes. I am going to change them ASAP.
what are your thoughts about the descriptions?

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The descriptions seem mostly okay.

In the dental flyer gig you could reword “has these distinguish features:”.

In “I will design unique food, restaurant flyer, food menu, and poster” - I’m not sure whether it needs so much spacing after the numbers/bullet points in the “WHY ME” section.

In the “I will design educational, dental, medical, health care flyers” gig you could see if adding a blank line before “Why I’m the BEST for you:” might help. Maybe remove some of the blank lines before “What I will need to start:”.

Also in that gig there’s an option for “0 days delivery” in the basic package if you look in the “compare packages” section. I’d change that.

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Thank you for your time and help🙂

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try to promote your gig to social media …

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