First gig and need suggestions

[duarizvi5]

I just posted my first gig and I am in need of suggestions on how to make it better to get orders. Please give suggestions from your experience here. Here’s the link to my gig.
https://www.fiverr.com/share/Q7KXve

[zainmia]

I saw your gig was awesome but first thing that it’s title is fully against of SEO like you have to choose the title which most people search it doesn’t matter that your title should make any sense or not description is short brief description attracts more. These are just my suggestion I am not telling you that your gig is useless am just telling you some improvements.

[imagination7413]

You might want to redo that essay review gig, so that it doesn’t offer any rewrite. It’s at high risk of breaking the Fiverr TOS.
As for the other gig, I’m not particularly impressed by your sample images. The layouts are very nice, but there’s too many spots where portions vanish into the background. Also, the screenshot with the black on the top and bottom needs to be cropped.

See (IMG) point 2:

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