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Gig critiques, anyone?


rlovelaceltd

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Book review gig: there’s a typo in the second gig extra.

Original content gig: consider making your sentences a little shorter in the first paragraph. While the whole thing demonstrates that you can write well, breaking it up might make it easier to read.



Other than that, they both look convincing and professional. Your choices of photos are very fitting as well.



I’d love to hear your feedback on my stuff as well.



Good luck!

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