rlovelaceltd Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 I have some free time tonight and would love to look at your gigs and give you some constructive feedback. 8-> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lexwrites Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 Hi, please check out my gigs. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rlovelaceltd Posted March 17, 2015 Author Share Posted March 17, 2015 Book review gig: there’s a typo in the second gig extra.Original content gig: consider making your sentences a little shorter in the first paragraph. While the whole thing demonstrates that you can write well, breaking it up might make it easier to read.Other than that, they both look convincing and professional. Your choices of photos are very fitting as well.I’d love to hear your feedback on my stuff as well.Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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