Guide me if there is any problem in my profile

[salihafatima120]

Kindly guide me if there is any problem with my profile as I am a newbie. Plz
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These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will do editing and polish your content
In the gig description:
“more words .I’ll also” could be “more words. I’ll also”

Gig: I will write SEO article or blog for you
In the gig description:
“Welcome to my gig.Looking for” could be “Welcome to my gig. Looking for”

Gig: I will write short story for your kids at any time
In the gig description:
“for your kids in there free time?” could be “for your kids in their free time?”
“enjoy my stories in there free time.” could be “enjoy my stories in their free time.”
“Welcome to my gig.Looking for” could be “Welcome to my gig. Looking for”

In the profile:
“contact me with out hesitation .” could be “contact me without hesitation.”

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Follow this link for creating your gig and profile, this is gold from one of the Fiverr managers…

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[salihafatima120]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will do editing and polish your content

In the gig description:

“more words .I’ll also” could be “more words. I’ll also”

Gig: I will write SEO article or blog for you

In the gig description:

“Welcome to my gig.Looking for” could be “Welcome to my gig. Looking for”

Gig: I will write short story for your kids at any time

In the gig description:

“for your kids in there free time?” could be “for your kids in their free time?”

“enjoy my stories in there free time.” could be “enjoy my stories in their free time.”

“Welcome to my gig.Looking for” could be “Welcome to my gig. Looking for”

In the profile:

“contact me with out hesitation .” could be “contact me without hesitation.”

Thanks for your advice