Help me critique my gigs


#1

Hello everyone,

I am a level 2 Resume and LinkedIn writer. My sales level has dropped and I will like everyone to leave their suggestions if there are any errors I need to correct.

Looking forward to your critique.

Jane


#2

Well, you sure have tons of sales so you seem to figure it out. An old thread you posted still has valuable advice to revisit:


#3

Thank you very much! Let me head over there


#4

I have changed my description and I will appreciate if you can point out any errors except the pictures which I am working on. Thanks