Help me in getting first order


#1

Hey Guys

I am new in the fiverr and its been a week i made multiple gigs but no order yet. Can somebody help me and go through my gigs to tell me any mistake i have made.

Thanks

https://www.fiverr.com/armaghanahmad


#2

Dear Armaghan:

I took a quick look at your profile:

Your profile image: I suggest a straightforward photo of you, smiling. Why confuse Buyers with 2 people in your image?
Your log line: is too generic. You should beef this up to make yourself stand out.
Your profile text – note the edits:

I know you are busy and so I’m here to help you with your assignments. -Armaghan Ahmad

I suggest you invest in a copy writer to come up with something more compelling.

All your gigs should have video and 3 images, and so on…

Make a video of yourself talking to the camera, because this approach garners IMMEDIATE RESULTS. Include additional samples in the video!

Please note that constructions such as, “I will be doing chemical Engineering problems” are considered awkward by Westerners, who expect to see, “I will complete your chemical engineering problems”. The gig I description I glanced at has similar awkward phrasing, so I seriously suggest you invest in a copy writer.

Good luck,
Blaise

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Be sure to make use of Tools like the Fiverr Blog, Fiverr Academy, and Fiverrcast.

I suggest you check out Fiverrcast episode 08: Working Through Language Barriers.

If you take the time to earn your Autobiographer Badge, particularly adding a link to your Fiverr profile, other forum participants will be able to easily view your information.

As a general rule, when I have time to participate in the Fiverr Forum and I notice a request like yours in the “Improve My Gig” section, I am willing and able to look at a Seller’s Profile and one gig one time.

I can give you a better level of assistance if you first work your way through the checklist below. That way, I won’t waste your one turn by advising you to follow items on the checklist.















#3

Thank You very much for your time sir. I will make changes according to your instructions.


#4

Dear Armaghan:

Please be sure to Click at the bottom of my first post in this thread.

Once you’ve gone through all that material and thoroughly revised everything, if you want me to take a closer look at 1 of your gigs you can post in this thread, and I’ll try to help you more if I can.

It should take a minimum of 4 weeks for you to work your way through all the suggestions.

Good luck,
Blaise


#5

hello I joined fiverr few days ago, can you help me improve my profile?

https://www.fiverr.com/keyur44


#6

Dear Keyur:

What name do you like to be called? Your customers want to know what to call you.

I took a quick look at your profile:

Your profile image: You should smile and look into the camera.
Your log line: I suggest you find another one.
Your profile text – note the edits:

Hello! An Automobile enthusiast, I studied Automobile engineering. I have experience in Logo Design and Photoshop editing. I am here to help you. -[Name Buyers Should Call You]

All your gigs should have video and 2 pdfs, and so on…

Make a video of yourself talking to the camera, because this approach garners IMMEDIATE RESULTS. Include additional samples in the video!

You need to polish your English: I suggest you check out Fiverrcast episode 08: Working Through Language Barriers.

Good luck,
Blaise


#7

thank you very much for taking time.