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Help me please, about grammar


#1

I offer gig about animation and gig description below :
I know it is not good grammar, so i need your help (I will give your animation for free as thanks)

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Do you have story that you want it anime ? Then i will create the animation from your story. $5 per 1 figure per 10 second.
Still background is $5. Any backsound/music $5 too.
Example : you want animation of your birthday. Your children too. Total 3 person. You want it 20 seconds long.
So the cost is $5 x 2 x 3 person = $30

Just for test, you can order as little as $5 for your action alone. You will get video 10 seconds long, 1 figure. After you satisfy you can expand your order

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#2

Do you have a story you want animated? I will deliver 10 seconds of one animated figure for $5.

Adding a still background or background sound/music is an additional $5.

For example, a 20 second animation with three figures (characters) would be $30 … $5 x 2 ten second intervals x 3 figures = $30.

As a test, you can order as little as $5 for your action alone. I’ll send you a 10 second video with one figure. If it meets your expectations, you can expand your order.


Not that you asked, but I don’t think your issue is grammar. It may be that your pricing is more complicated than buyers want to deal with. I also do animation and more often than not, people don’t know how long a video or how many figures they want/need. I find that most of my buyers give me a general description then want me to use my own ideas to complete their order.

When needed, I also provide a free flat drawing or short sample (2 - 3 seconds) to give the buyer a look at what I can do for them before an official offer is made. It’s a bit of extra work for no profit, but it’s always resulted in an order, so it seems worth it to me.

Good luck!


#3

thank you
send me your picture to animate with my own style


#4

HaHa…why don’t you hire a translator or writer here $5 instead of begging for help?


#5

I can help you about grammar


#6

If you ever want a little extra help with your text, then I’d be happy to lend a hand at any point in the future. Just shoot me a message on what you want reviewing, and I’ll touch it up for you as soon as I can.

Hope this helps!


#7

You should take care of your own first.


#8

I give you a lot of credit mustopa3000 for asking for help with your grammar!

You made my day with this post. I wish more people would ask for help with grammar instead of pretending to be expert writers and grammar experts who have terrible English. I understand when people are not familiar with the rules of English grammar and there is no shame in not being familiar with it. People will help you with it when you ask.
You did the right thing by asking.


#9

No. You cannot.


#10

No need to do that when people will be glad to help him here no charge.


#11

You should hire someone that does copywriting or article writing with a good grasp on the English language :slight_smile:


#12

SPAM


#13

I think it shows the Fiverr community spirit that this seller asked and got help.