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adebusuyi

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When you say “on the off chance that you require different lengths please check my different administrations or send me a message”
I don’t think “administrations” is the best word to use there. I think you could make it clearer what they need to do if they require a different length article other than send a message.

I’d probably reword “went down with quite a long while of experience”.
Maybe reword “Anticipating get notification from you”.

Also in your profile you could reword “I guarantee you of the followings in my writing service” (maybe “followings” should be “following” etc.).

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