Hi! I would like some advice on my gig

[srichandramouli]

https://www.fiverr.com/srichandramouli/proofread-and-edit-writing-for-3-dollars-per-page?ref_ctx_id=4eef1121-52e8-4a9d-8460-e16ef5d27fb1

Here is the link, and I would really appreciate it if I could get some feedback on it. Thanks!