Dear Seniors, I am a new in your group, around 3 weeks old. After receiving a Tip from a senior, now I have responded to buyer’s request but still not getting any order. May be my response is not good enough to impress the buyer. For Instance, one buyer had posted “You have to convert data into excel sheet”. To this post of buyer I responded “Dear Sir, I would like to offer my services for the same. You can send a sample file to judge my ability. Also, please confirm the quantum of work to offer you a competitive offer. Regards”. Can anybody please guide/advise me about the improvements needed.
Another Example , a buyer posted “need someone to do data entry. Transfer products, descriptions ect from my shopify website to my square site. Tasks include: uploading pics product descriptions entering product inventory keywords alt tags new products, various pictures, description and inventory. should be approximately 60 products”. To this buyer I responded “I offer my service to do data entry and I understand that this job includes data entry and working on website also. I am confident that this job will be done to your satisfaction. Would like you to give me an opportunity.” Please advise if I am responding to the buyer’s in a good way or there can be some better ways to respond to them to get an opportunity to grab the job.