It looks alot better already, but i recommend adding even more information.
Take a look at my gig description:
Some other tips i can give you:
Try to make your buyer trust you
Make your description as specific as possible (i’d say AT LEAST 400 characters)
Update your profile
Keep in mind, there are hundreds of other logo designers, yours should be better than others, or they’ll choose another gig!
I hope i helped you