How can i improve my gig, I have done everything

[afzalraza573]

My gig is not getting that much of impression and clicks what i was thinking i have done everything for my gig i don’t know what to do now.
please fiverr family share your experience with me 😔
I will boost your sell on amazon within two month

[identproduction]

Hiya, I’ve had a quick look at your gig and can maybe offer a wee bit of advice. Please don’t think I’m being rude or condescending; I’ll just be as honest with you as I would be with myself.

Your title should read “I will boost your sales on amazon within two months” or something like that. I’m guessing English isn’t your first language, so it might be worth getting someone else to look at your grammar in your gigs. If you were writing in your native language, I’m sure you’d make those words leap out from the page so don’t take this, what is meant to be constructive feedback, the wrong way. I couldn’t even begin to write a gig in Farsi or Urdu!

99% of your problem, as far as I can see, is just that - due to you not being 100% fluent in English and the idiosyncrasies of the written language - your writing comes off as amateurish and unreliable. The first impression any buyer gets from you should be positive and create confidence, so poor spelling and grammar will immediately turn off most people. You clearly have the skills to actually do the job, so the rest of it just comes down to presentation. Here’s a few suggestions for how to restructure your gig and word your description a bit better.

“I will do amazon list optimization and off page/ on page both that will surely increase your sell”

This doesn’t really make sense as it is. Again, I’m being as honest with you as I am with myself or anyone else. I see no use in sugar-coating things when we can just cut to the chase and make the necessary changes. A more useful rewording of your description might be:

“I will optimize your SEO listings to increase your sales.”

That way it’s grammatically correct, but more importantly gives the buyer a simple outline of the service you provide, i.e. you specialize in SEO optimization in a manner that has been shown to increase sales.

Let’s go through your gig description and see what could be improved or made clearer:

Amazon is very big platform where buyers, ready to buy products, they search for exactly what they need ( Keyword) . And in the starting of listing buyers cant reach your product that’s why you need to hire a seo specialist who is expert in this task like we are.

It might make more sense and have more impact if we said:

“Amazon is filled with buyers looking for your products or services. Buyers use keywords to find what they need, but without SEO optimization they’ll never find you online. This is why you need an expert team like ourselves to take your business to the next level.”

Phrased this way, you’re saying exactly the same thing but it just flows together more easily and portrays your confidence in your ability to provide this service. Next…

"We are perfectionists at SEO specially amazon with lots for experience.

We are highly innovative and adept in this Art, with avant-garde ideas, using Best Quality back links that easily reach by common people and all."

Again, just a matter of being unfamiliar with the weird rules of the English language, but it’s easily fixed:

"*We are an experienced team of SEO specialists who strive to help businesses like yours grow in the online world. Our focus on Amazon as a platform allows us to develop powerful tools for SEO; combining creativity and passion, backed up by compliance with industry standards. *

Afzal and the team will work with you to boost your webranking and increase your online visibility."

So again, just a rough rewording of what you’ve already said, but in a more palatable fashion.

Finally…

" Why* hire me *?

Optimizing, listing and work on SEO for product is not that easy. It takes a lot of time, patience, lot of failure, and hard work.

Please Allow me to work with you. This is Afzal here and I’m here to do all the hard work for you and your product."

There’s a few things here: Firstly, I don’t know whether you even need this ending part as you’ve already said most of it in the first few sections. Secondly, avoid using negative words like “failure”; it’s a cliche really, but it can have a subtle impact on the way a buyer sees your posts. I’ll reword it in the way that I’d do it, if I were offering SEO stuff.

"Why Hire Me

SEO research and implementation is a long and difficult process, but one that’s essential in todays market. Allow me and my team to handle this for you with confidence, and let you get back to building your business while we work our magic.

Place your order with me today and we can get to work."

Ending your gig description with a “Call to Action” is essential. TELL the buyer that they should be placing their order with you, but not in such a way that it seems too obvious.

That’s just my personal take on your problem here, and I hope the advice above will be of some use to you.

Good luck and hopefully you’ll see your first order soon!

Tommy

[afzalraza573]

Hiya, I’ve had a quick look at your gig and can maybe offer a wee bit of advice. Please don’t think I’m being rude or condescending; I’ll just be as honest with you as I would be with myself.

Your title should read “I will boost your sales on amazon within two months” or something like that. I’m guessing English isn’t your first language, so it might be worth getting someone else to look at your grammar in your gigs. If you were writing in your native language, I’m sure you’d make those words leap out from the page so don’t take this, what is meant to be constructive feedback, the wrong way. I couldn’t even begin to write a gig in Farsi or Urdu!

99% of your problem, as far as I can see, is just that - due to you not being 100% fluent in English and the idiosyncrasies of the written language - your writing comes off as amateurish and unreliable. The first impression any buyer gets from you should be positive and create confidence, so poor spelling and grammar will immediately turn off most people. You clearly have the skills to actually do the job, so the rest of it just comes down to presentation. Here’s a few suggestions for how to restructure your gig and word your description a bit better.

“I will do amazon list optimization and off page/ on page both that will surely increase your sell”

This doesn’t really make sense as it is. Again, I’m being as honest with you as I am with myself or anyone else. I see no use in sugar-coating things when we can just cut to the chase and make the necessary changes. A more useful rewording of your description might be:

“I will optimize your SEO listings to increase your sales.”

That way it’s grammatically correct, but more importantly gives the buyer a simple outline of the service you provide, i.e. you specialize in SEO optimization in a manner that has been shown to increase sales.

Let’s go through your gig description and see what could be improved or made clearer:

Amazon is very big platform where buyers, ready to buy products, they search for exactly what they need ( Keyword) . And in the starting of listing buyers cant reach your product that’s why you need to hire a seo specialist who is expert in this task like we are.

It might make more sense and have more impact if we said:

“Amazon is filled with buyers looking for your products or services. Buyers use keywords to find what they need, but without SEO optimization they’ll never find you online. This is why you need an expert team like ourselves to take your business to the next level.”

Phrased this way, you’re saying exactly the same thing but it just flows together more easily and portrays your confidence in your ability to provide this service. Next…

"We are perfectionists at SEO specially amazon with lots for experience.

We are highly innovative and adept in this Art, with avant-garde ideas, using Best Quality back links that easily reach by common people and all."

Again, just a matter of being unfamiliar with the weird rules of the English language, but it’s easily fixed:

"*We are an experienced team of SEO specialists who strive to help businesses like yours grow in the online world. Our focus on Amazon as a platform allows us to develop powerful tools for SEO; combining creativity and passion, backed up by compliance with industry standards. *

Afzal and the team will work with you to boost your webranking and increase your online visibility."

So again, just a rough rewording of what you’ve already said, but in a more palatable fashion.

Finally…

" Why* hire me *?

Optimizing, listing and work on SEO for product is not that easy. It takes a lot of time, patience, lot of failure, and hard work.

Please Allow me to work with you. This is Afzal here and I’m here to do all the hard work for you and your product."

There’s a few things here: Firstly, I don’t know whether you even need this ending part as you’ve already said most of it in the first few sections. Secondly, avoid using negative words like “failure”; it’s a cliche really, but it can have a subtle impact on the way a buyer sees your posts. I’ll reword it in the way that I’d do it, if I were offering SEO stuff.

"Why Hire Me

SEO research and implementation is a long and difficult process, but one that’s essential in todays market. Allow me and my team to handle this for you with confidence, and let you get back to building your business while we work our magic.

Place your order with me today and we can get to work."

Ending your gig description with a “Call to Action” is essential. TELL the buyer that they should be placing their order with you, but not in such a way that it seems too obvious.

That’s just my personal take on your problem here, and I hope the advice above will be of some use to you.

Good luck and hopefully you’ll see your first order soon!

Tommy

Thank you so much for your precious time . For sure am going to change my gig as you suggest.

And please tell me how can we connect again for future when i will update my more services on fiverr

[afzalraza573]

Thank you so much for your precious time . For sure am going to change my gig as you suggest.

And please tell me how can we connect again for future when i will update my more services on fiverr

If something else changes is required like price related or tags etc. so please guide me for this

[identproduction]

If something else changes is required like price related or tags etc. so please guide me for this

No problem, mate! Glad I can help.

I’m not 100% sure whether Fiverr still allows you to do this sort of thing for other sellers, but let me check it out and I’ll see if it’s still ok. If so, I’ll create a gig and we can discuss it from there as I’d be happy to help!

[identproduction]

If something else changes is required like price related or tags etc. so please guide me for this

Looks like it’s still alright to offer sales copy to fellow sellers as a service, so just check out my gig page in an hour or so and send me a message. 😃