How can i improve my gig pls tips me

[techuzzal420]

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My Quality :

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My Service Description:

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7.Focus your main Keywords/tags,
8.ON page & OF page SEO,
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[uk1000]

Here’s my comments:

Video & description says “I don’t use any boot or fake Audience” - do you mean you don’t use any bot?

“ON page & OF page SEO” could be “On page & off page SEO” or “On-page & off-page SEO”.

Where it says “100% amusement and completely professional service Guaranteed”, I’m not sure it’s best to say “100% amusement”.

[techuzzal420]

thanks for contributing