asaduzzamanbd Posted April 8, 2017 Share Posted April 8, 2017 Hi,I am not a new seller, 6-7 month ago, I was getting goo response and good selling but now, I am not getting sales.Can you suggest me after seeing my gig That is well or not ? My gig link is : Gig linkPlease suggest to do better after seeing my gig.Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anwarzz Posted April 9, 2017 Share Posted April 9, 2017 Hi there,I am a copyeditor so I noticed few things in the language and general appearance of the text:1- In the title, change “html” to "HTML"2- In the second package, instead of using “Standard (Most Used)” make it "Standard (Best Value)"3- I can not see why “I am a” is in bold and the rest of the sentence is not. In general, bold-font usage is not purposeful and seems arbitrary.Good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asaduzzamanbd Posted April 9, 2017 Author Share Posted April 9, 2017 Hi there,I am a copyeditor so I noticed few things in the language and general appearance of the text:1- In the title, change “html” to "HTML"2- In the second package, instead of using “Standard (Most Used)” make it "Standard (Best Value)"3- I can not see why “I am a” is in bold and the rest of the sentence is not. In general, bold-font usage is not purposeful and seems arbitrary.Good luckThank you so much for your suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anwarzz Posted April 9, 2017 Share Posted April 9, 2017 Thank you so much for your suggestions.Welcome. Good luck 🙂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.