How to improve my gigs?

[lattetsu]

Hi! I started making gigs on fiverr a little less than a month ago and its been really hard securing orders(My focus is on the character art gig). I’ve looked at other gigs and tried to go off those but still no orders, my only one has been from buyer requests. 😦
Any critique is appreciated, thank you!

[blaisefaint]

Dear Janie:

I took a look at your profile. Here are my thoughts:

• Your log line:
  Illustration Obsessed

This creates a negative connotation in my mind. I’d suggest re-doing this. Maybe “Awesome Illustrator” or something along those lines.

*Your profile image:

You look stressed out here. You should use an image of yourself smiling.

• Your profile text:

Hi there, I’m Janie!
I’m interested in animation & illustration and would love to make illustrations, icons, and anything else for you.

Please note I changed “Interested” to “interested.” I suggest that you polish your English, grammar, spelling, capitalization, etc., in your gigs. I don’t find any major problems, but you would benefit from giving it a once-over. I don’t know why you have ^^ in one of your gig descriptions, for example.

Here’s a checklist to help you improve your gigs.

Good luck,
Blaise