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How to response to buyer requests?

I basically want to know about how to respond to buyers request. I mean should I go straight forward for a deal or should I write catchy or lengthy paragraphs to grab the attention of buyers.
Kindly, help me out and suggest me something also check out my gigs and profile if you think there is something wrong or missing then must tell me. you are open to criticize me.
https://www.fiverr.com/alaina786?up_rollout=true