I need help convincing a buyer on buyer request
By not lying.
In your profile, you say you have a degree in English from a college in California. You also say you have 10 years of experience as a writer.
If all of that’s true, why are there 8 grammatical and mechanical errors in your profile description alone?
This behaviour gives the whole site a bad name.
Write a short offer for buyer requests,
don’t introduce your self in the offer,
write about the buyer request which they Need and how you solve and provide sevice regard the request
A nice profile with great feedbacks is the best way to convince a potential buyer!
Don,t waste your precious time hiring freelancers who does not provide the quality of work for which they promise and commits to delivery !
PS. It’s Don’t not Don,t - that made me chuckle. Your apostrophe got tired and fell down
It’s an offensive compliment.
You are suggesting to the buyer that:
a) the buyer is clueless and needs to be educated
b) the buyer is a timewaster.
Sorry, but this will only convince potential buyers that their choice not to hire you is a good one.
any suggestion me another
Frankly, hardly any of your sentences makes sense.
I suggest you read this post:
My name is sarowar,I am a Professional Youth Photo editing here on Fiverr. My gigs start at as low as $5.and I love to work with you on your project.
How is it.
All the grammatical errors aside, you should put a space after each period and comma. This is a rule that applies to all languages.
I see, you didn’t take the time to read the post I mentioned. It would have been 3 minutes well spend, but as I stated in a reaction to this: the people who should read it will not do it. Thanks for confirming my theory.
I think the bigger problem here is that this offer doesn’t say anything about the request you’re bidding on. This is just a template and probably gets deleted as soon as you send it.
I’m not sure what to even recommend here. Maybe hire a mentor who will get you started. If you don’t have financial resources to hire a mentor then keep reading posts in this forum. Although I doubt this will help you much because you’ve been on this platform 3 months and if you didn’t figure out by now what’s wrong with your gig and offers, I doubt you’ll manage to do it on your own.
LOL! I was always under the impression that fiverr CS confirmed Education status, before you could ad it… I guess not…
Yeah, it can’t be the case, can it?
The OP must be the only proofreader in the world to have misspelled the words grammar and punctuation in their ad.
Flawless writing skills, utilizing 5 to 10 sentences addressing buyer’s needs. (100% guarantee)
- No template
- No fake, stock profile picture
- No lies about your skills