Delivering work with in a short time
Do less fun
The work should be carried out with pleasure! I would disagree with you saying that one should do less fun. The combination between hard work and having fun is the vehicle that drives real success!
Well Saimon, I can tell English isn’t your native tongue, and while you don’t offer copywriting services, broken English can hurt you. So let’s start with your headline, it’s not “How win a job” but “How to win a job?” or “Why you should hire me” or better yet, a headline related to your service: "Hire a Talented Graphic Designer."
Then hire a write to proofread all your gigs so they’re written correctly. If you want to get lots of orders, offering delivery in 3-days will help, some aggressive sellers do it in one day.
Best of luck.
That’s not funny at all, Saimon dear.
I want funny and I want to get some gigs.
I want people to laugh,
while paying for my services.