I got no orders

[alexanderstark1]

https://www.fiverr.com/alexanderstark1/set-up-an-optimised-facebook-business-page
Please tell what I do wrong

[teachernita]

I see errors in your gig description.

Put the word ‘the’ before CTA
Change (My words are crisp and cut…) This entire sentence is not good English.

Get someone who is English, on Fiverr, to correct your English. If you are offering a service setting up Facebook pages you need your English grammar to be absolutely correct.

Otherwise, your gig picture is good!

[bmsurujuddin]

I see errors in your gig description.

Put the word ‘the’ before CTA

Change (My words are crisp and cut…) This entire sentence is not good English.

Get someone who is English, on Fiverr, to correct your English. If you are offering a service setting up Facebook pages you need your English grammar to be absolutely correct.

Otherwise, your gig picture is good!

@teachernita thanks for those information!

[alexanderstark1]

I see errors in your gig description.

Put the word ‘the’ before CTA

Change (My words are crisp and cut…) This entire sentence is not good English.

Get someone who is English, on Fiverr, to correct your English. If you are offering a service setting up Facebook pages you need your English grammar to be absolutely correct.

Otherwise, your gig picture is good!

Thanks a lot for the advice