These are my suggestions/comments:
Gig: I will do excellent data entry ,copy work and become you virtual assistant
In the gig title:
Maybe change “and become you virtual assistant”. Maybe change the spacing around the comma.
In the gig description:
Maybe change “by doing you work.”
In the standard package you say “all work in the BASIC”. Maybe clarify that you’re talking about the basic package. I’d check the spelling of the standard package title.
In the video maybe change “Giving a first Delivery”.
In the profile:
“Expert in contain writing ,” could be changed.
Maybe reword “I am a web design and development .”
“good English spoking” could be changed.