I Need Your Opinion..!

[andiwandirana]

Hi,

My name is Andy I’am here since feb 2019
and im have completed 2 orderlast week

i just want to ask you guys about your opinion about my gigs

here is the link : https://www.fiverr.com/share/DZL2Q

Please be honest about your gigs opinion ill take any positive sugesstion from y’all

Regards,
Andi wandi rana

[bestintheword]

PLEASE READ THIS CAREFULLY BEFORE ORDERS
This is your opening statement
I think it should be
PLEASE READ THIS CAREFULLY BEFORE ORDERING

[andiwandirana]

ow thank you very much i didn’t realize it

[thatwordchick]

Hey Andy! My name is Delany - I’m a copywriter. While there aren’t any particularly bad grammar errors or anything, the tone of your ad comes off a little casual. I can see your images being used for CEO portraits on startup websites, author/convention speaker bios, etc - don’t sell yourself short! You should use a tone that reflects this kind of high-value placement and emphasize the value of having these unique versions of oneself. I can help if you’d like. 🙂