I wanna Improve my gig to get more views

[mahmoudosama94]

Hello,
can you please check this gig because I tried as much as I can to improve it but I didn’t get any orders and every day I share It on social media and once I didn’t share It for one single day No one clicks and no views so I wanna know how to improve this gig and how to get more orders and if there are any tips about promoting my gig I hope to help me.
https://www.fiverr.com/mahmoudosama94/design-a-stunning-business-card-in-24-hrs?arrived_from_manage_gigs=true&display_share=true

[djwaruna]

Dear @mahmoudosama94

Promote your gigs daily

[somaginer1996]

There are a few grammatical errors, but honestly other than that it seems pretty solid.