You do realize you not only replied to a thread that is almost 4 years old, but, that you also hijacked someone else’s thread.
You may want to familiarize yourself with the forum rules before posting next time.
Also, posting “I need first order” in the forum is not how you get orders. Most forum readers are also sellers and looking for their “first order” or next order.
If you want others to critique your Gig or you want introduce your Gig to the community here, you can only post your Gig in 2 categories of the forum: “My Fiverr Gigs” and “Improve My Gig”.