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  • 2 weeks later...

Reply to @logo_desing:
“wow! it’s a great news for you!! Keep good working, i hope with in few days i will got 2nd level seller also.”

here’s a friendly message. i can tell that englsh is not your first language. your message is great and i am not putting you down but here are a few tips to improve your message grammatically.

"it’s a great news for you!!"
write: "it’s great news for you!"
leave out the ‘a’
“news” is a plural, collective noun which does not take an indefinite article. it can take a definite article such as “the news” but “it’s great news” is better.

"Keep good working,"
write: “Keep working well,” or “Keep doing good work,”
“good” is an adjective. it describes a noun (work), not a verb (working). “well” (or “great”) is an adverb to use with verbs.

“i hope with in few days”
‘within’ is one word

"i will got 2nd level seller also."
write: “i will have 2nd level seller, also.”

“got” is past tense of “have” so cannot appear with “will”

hope you take this lesson in the spirit it is given.
i wish i could write a second language as well as you write english. 🙂
wishing you much success!
<3


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