Is my VO demo good enough to compete on Fiverr? If not, advice?


I’ve been doing stage acting for 13 years and perform sketch comedy and improv in Chicago, but I am just now starting to try to build a voice over career and am looking to book my first voice over gig.

I recorded my demo with my Zoom h4n Digital Recorder in my Pyramid Foam treated closet. I was hoping some of the more experienced VO actors on this site might be able to review my voice over demo and let me know if the sound quality and/or acting/commercial selection is good enough to get real voice over work or if I need to invest in a better microphone or try different commercials or just get better at acting? haha Any advise/ feedback would be amazing!

Here is my gig with my Voice Over Demo:

Thank you,