Gig: I will design responsive wordpress landing page within 12 hours
In the FAQ section: “Please send a message before placing an order. So we can agree on the details and chose which plan” could be “Please send a message before placing an order so we can agree on the details and choose which plan”
Where it says “we can surely do all our discussions using the Fiverr message board” - maybe change “Fiverr message board” to “Fiverr messaging system” or “Fiverr inbox”.
I only had a bit of time to look at the gig so I watched the video, and I think it’s great that you showed yourself! The video quality isn’t too bad, a little shaky but I can understand why, the only thing I’d recommend is fixing the audio, there’s a lot of noise in the background and in some parts it can be difficult to hear the voice, you could outsource from one of the many audio engineers on Fiverr (like me ), or there are tons of tutorials out there that can help you get it done even with free software. Good luck!