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My grammar


#1

This post is for native speakers. Can you tell me your impressions about my grammar on my video:
https://www.fiverr.com/ninjavfx/make-this-explainer-video-sell-promote-explain?funnel=3e0d871c-0731-4205-826f-cbf2a3eff53b

Is it…correct? Thank you.


#2

Your thread was moved to “My Fiverr Gigs” here you should be able to get some help ;).


#3

The grammar in the video sounds fine. Unless it’s just an audio issue, it sounds like you are missing an “a” at the start of the missing link sentence. Either that, or it could be rephrased to “Professional explainer videos are…” You also have a few articles (a/an/the) missing in your gig description. It’s not a huge deal, but it’s unusual for native English speakers to drop articles. That’s a nice video, BTW.


#4

Thank you very much!