Naming Your Gig: Short and Sweet or More Detailed?

[earthenfervor]

Hello again! Id like to thank those I’ve corresponded with so far for the helping hands! And so with this process comes another inquiry from me. On my first gig I worried my title was a bit too long; however, I followed my gut and now feel it was the proper title, even earning me my first potential commission! Now I feel more confident to move on to posting my Printables, but the titles I have developed seem to be a bit long. At the same time, every word seems necessary to fully advertise what I’m offering, and so my dilemma comes in. So I ask, what do you think is better?

Part of it is me not wanting to over-use “keywords” as my recent readings uncover Fiverr’s algorithm may have changed in a way that frowns upon this repetition through the gig. Here are the examples of one of my titles, so you can really see what I mean:

(I Will) Create a Story-Based Word Search Puzzle for Any Occasion

vs

(I Will) Create a Story-Based Word Search Puzzle
OR
(I Will) Create Story Word Search Puzzles

I also use the same words/words of the same likeness throughout my description. I guess my main concern is understanding what could hinder me! Thanks in advance!

[genuineguidance]

I like #2 best.

#1 is too long. You can give more information in the body of what your Gig offers about how these puzzles can be for “any occasion”. I doubt anyone is searching for a keyword “occasion or any” - at least, probably not in this niche.

I am not feeling #3 for some reason.

Good luck!

GG

[earthenfervor]

I like #2 best.

#1 is too long. You can give more information in the body of what your Gig offers about how these puzzles can be for “any occasion”. I doubt anyone is searching for a keyword “occasion or any” - at least, probably not in this niche.

I am not feeling #3 for some reason.

Good luck!

GG

Thank you, genuinely! I think you are exactly right…most probably just hope the gigs they can find for their searches would be for any occasion! Plus, I am indeed detailing that in the gig’s description.

Good luck to you as well!!