Need Help ! Analyse My Gig Please!

[alvial]

Hello All ! Hope everyone is having a great time !! I want to analyse my gigs. If there is any mistakes I’ve made. Please Let me know. 🙂

HERE IS THE LINK !

Thank You ! 🙂

[tia_services]

It looks great! Just one thing…
You said: Hi and Thank You So my for visiting my gig.
I think you should say: Hi and Thank You so much for visiting my gig 😉
or you can just say: Hello! Welcome to my gig.

Hope that helped 😄

[alvial]

It looks great! Just one thing…

You said: Hi and Thank You So my for visiting my gig.

I think you should say: Hi and Thank You so much for visiting my gig 😉

or you can just say: Hello! Welcome to my gig.

Hope that helped 😄