Need Help ! Analyse My Gig Please!


#1

Hello All ! Hope everyone is having a great time !! I want to analyse my gigs. If there is any mistakes I’ve made. Please Let me know. :slight_smile:

HERE IS THE LINK !

Thank You ! :slightly_smiling_face:


#2

It looks great! Just one thing…
You said: Hi and Thank You So my for visiting my gig.
I think you should say: Hi and Thank You so much for visiting my gig :wink:
or you can just say: Hello! Welcome to my gig.

Hope that helped :smile:


#3

Thanks You So Much For Your Advice :slight_smile: