Hello, Could anyone check my gig and give me some advises?
Welcome to the Fiverr forums.
You should first and foremost remove the bit-ly URL. The list of permitted URLs can be found here, under the Managing Gigs header.
For more: check out the Tips For Sellers category: You’ll find hundreds of threads offering advice on a variety of things to consider and/or improve. (Note: not all advice can apply to all gigs or categories, and be sure you check multiple sources as there are some false tips.)
It takes a lot of work to make it as a freelancer, so be sure to research and plan accordingly.
“If you fail to plan, you are planning to fail.” (Attributed to Benjamin Franklin)