Need opinions to improve my gigs( edited)


#1

I’m new seller on Fiverr. I hope everyone here is healthy. I have recently created 7 gigs. Please check out my gigs and share your opinion about my gigs.
Gig 1: https://www.fiverr.com/hridoywriter/write-seo-optimized-well-researched-articles-and-blog-posts
Gig 2: https://www.fiverr.com/hridoywriter/write-250-to-300-words-effective-words-original-articles
Gig 3: https://www.fiverr.com/hridoywriter/proofread-edit-and-rewrite-your-novel
Gig 4:https://www.fiverr.com/hridoywriter/write-an-amazing-love-letter
Gig 5: https://www.fiverr.com/hridoywriter/do-superheroes-short-stories-writing
Gig 6:https://www.fiverr.com/hridoywriter/be-your-ghost-who-writes-literacy
Gig 7: https://www.fiverr.com/hridoywriter/your-fiction-to-nonfiction-to-science-fiction-writer

Thank you in advance.


#2

Shortened links are not allowed on the forum so you need to edit those (use the little edit pen) and just put the full Fiverr links.


#3

Do gig marketing bro


#4

Link has been edited


#5

You have got the correct links now.


#6

There’s more than one gig where you’ve highlighted the whole gig description. Doing that is probably a bad idea.

edit: Also where you say “And beware, a simple ‘Hello’ may lead to a life-long professional relationship . :)”, this sentence appears to be copied from the profile/gigs of another seller.


#7

It is a “hilarious” edition mistake :sweat_smile:


#8

Without work sample it will be difficult for any buyer to judge your writing ability. You should add portfolio/work sample with your gig. Also your gig images are plane photoes only. Adding some text on images may catch more attention ? :wink:


#9

I didn’t look at all of them, but here are some thoughts on a few gigs. Hopefully you’ll be able to apply these to all the rest of them as well.

" I Will Write SEO Optimized Well Researched Articles And Blog Posts": A lot of grammatical issues in the body of the description. Why do you put “highlights” in sarcastic quotes?

You also don’t need to literally highlight the highlights of your service.

" I Will Write 250 To 300 Words Effective Original Articles": Why do you need this as a separate gig if you already have a gig for articles? I feel like you could just put it down as a package in another gig.

" I Will Proofread, Edit And Rewrite Your Novel": You talk about your experience with “corporate clients”, but this is a novel gig. Most of your clients probably won’t be corporate. Talk about your experience with novels instead.

" I Will Be Your Ghost Who Writes Literacy": I don’t understand what this title is supposed to be. Why not just say “I will be your literary ghostwriter”?

You also copied part of your description from here: https://www.freelancewriting.com/ghostwriting/what-is-a-ghostwriter/


#11

Sorry but I totally disagree with you that I copied the " part of the description from there. Because I didn’t. Thanks for your tips. I’ll apply these tips soon. Much appreciated.


#12

Okay. I’ll try to edit them too. Thank you.


#13

I am sorry but that was not a yes or no question for you to agree or disagree on. She just proved that you copied it from elsewhere.

You copied it word for word without missing even a single punctuation mark :roll_eyes:

proof? :arrow_down:

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#14

Interesting, very interesting. :thinking:


#15

But I didn’t copy from there. Honestly, I did but from somewhere else. I fixed that now… I have to be more careful from now😅


#16

Or, y’know, just write your own content :slight_smile:


#17

Okay :blush: I will thank you @somaginer1996


#18