That’s not something I shop for, so I have little to no experience in that field, but your portfolio looks good and so does your description.
If there are 2 things I’d change it’d be:
- The number of revisions to 3 or omit it completelly.
Personaly when I’m buying something I don’t want to go through 5 rounds of revision to get what I need.
- On your note at the top of the description I’d change the focus from the price to the outcome.
Ex: DO NOT PLACE AN ORDER BEFORE DISCUSSING YOUR NEEDS SO WE CAN ACHIEVE THE BEST POSSIBLE RESULTS.
If the buyer is price sensitive for that particular gig saying for them to get in touch to know the price may discourage them from even contacting you.
Other than that I think everything looks good.