Hi , today i made my first gig. Please give me your honest opinion . Am i going to have offers with this type of gig ?
Welcome to the Fiverr forum.
At a glance, it looks like you need to work on expanding the description.
No one can guarantee orders on any gig. It can take some sellers months to get their first sale.
Please keep updates in the same thread. It’s against the rules of the forum to create duplicate threads. In the case of gig improvements, it’s doubly important, so that people can see what advice you’ve already been given.
As for the gig, it’s better, but your punctuation all has extra spaces in font of every period/full-stop and comma. In English, these are placed next to the word.
The expanded description is better, but still needs a lot of attention.