(Not my intention to criticize, just want to help you succeed)
a few things -
First, there are inconsistencies. For example, your pro offers 3500 words, while below where it says “words included,” you typed 700. Another example is that in the desc you wrote “i will deliver within 1 day max,” while in the packages, the delivery time for 2 of the packages - 2-3 days.
Second, are the typos with capital letters , space between punctuation marks, etc.
Third, and I don’t know if everyone would agree with me on this, but the pic you have is not personal. If you don’t have an idea for a good unique photo, I would use your profile pic for the gig photo as well.
And since you are brand new on this site, I def recommend a video introduction. What you offer is “unique writing,” so in my opinion, show your unique and friendly personality.
It’s just hard to get customers when they don’t see reviews or who is behind the gig.
Best of luck May.