I feel like I have improved my gig by alot.
But you can always take some constructive criticizm, so I am looking for some more inrpovements. Take a look.
Anybody have any help to offer?
- peanutmastah
Hey glad to see you used my suggestions 
I didn’t intend for you to use it word for word, was just more of a suggestion but let me know how it works out for you 
If it goes well, maybe I’ll start a gig title and description rewrite service to help sellers not getting conversions.
One thing I would recommend though is putting a hard line in between each paragraph so it’s easier to read.
- Justin
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Also, you should use the keyword “fortnite” or some variation in your tags.