peanutmastah Posted August 29, 2018 Share Posted August 29, 2018 I feel like I have improved my gig by alot.But you can always take some constructive criticizm, so I am looking for some more inrpovements. Take a look.My gig - https://www.fiverr.com/peanutmastah/coach-you-in-fortnite-battle-royale?ref_ctx_id=-d5ff4fe2-783b4070-8bd1-4f39f508774f Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutmastah Posted August 29, 2018 Author Share Posted August 29, 2018 I feel like I have improved my gig by alot.But you can always take some constructive criticizm, so I am looking for some more inrpovements. Take a look.My gig - https://www.fiverr.com/peanutmastah/coach-you-in-fortnite-battle-royale?ref_ctx_id=-d5ff4fe2-783b4070-8bd1-4f39f508774fAnybody have any help to offer?peanutmastah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newlevelseo Posted August 29, 2018 Share Posted August 29, 2018 Hey glad to see you used my suggestions 👍I didn’t intend for you to use it word for word, was just more of a suggestion but let me know how it works out for you 😉If it goes well, maybe I’ll start a gig title and description rewrite service to help sellers not getting conversions.One thing I would recommend though is putting a hard line in between each paragraph so it’s easier to read.Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newlevelseo Posted August 29, 2018 Share Posted August 29, 2018 Also, you should use the keyword “fortnite” or some variation in your tags. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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