Please can you help me with my Gig?


#1

Hi, I’m new in the fiverr forum and I really would love if you give me your opinion about my last Gig:

https://www.fiverr.com/crisshasart/create-a-beautiful-illustration-to-impress-your-valentine?funnel=f14a0afe-f3cb-4f1b-b9fd-c09b4711b5a4

This is the link, could you give me some tips to improve this Gig? Thank you so much! :smiley:

Best regards,

Crissha.


#2

Dear Sasha:

I took a quick look at your profile and your Valentine’s caricature gig:

Your profile image: No suggestions
Your log line – note the edits: I’m an Illustrator and graphic designer
Your profile text – note the edits:

Hi, everybody! I’m a very passionate Graphic Designer and Ilustrator who loves her job. I really want to make YOU happy with my skills, and to grow as a designer and digital artist. You can be sure that I will do my best for YOU! -Sasha Figarella

All your gigs should have video, 3 images, 2 pdfs (for more samples), and so on…

Make a video of yourself talking to the camera, because this approach garners IMMEDIATE RESULTS. Include additional samples in the video!

The gig title is awkward, because Fiverr does not allow you to include a “’” in “Valentine’s”. I suggest rewording the gig to address this issue.

Text – note the edits:

This will be the perfect gift for this beautiful Valentine’s Day for your darling! Just imagine the face of your lover when they see your feelings reflected in a beautiful caricature!

This illustration is ready for print, so you can give it to your valentine in person but if you are miles away from your lover it can be a really special digital surprise for them!

So make your Valentine’s order Right NOW!

Before you make your order, if you have questions, please write me so I can help you!

I’ve corrected some awkward phrasing, but you’d be wise to hire a copy writer to make your gig description more compelling. You probably need to clean up your other gig descriptions, as well.

Good luck,
Blaise

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#3

Hi Sir, thank you so much your opinion and the correction. I will keep in mind what you suggest me to do, I really apprecite this!