Please checkout my gig if you have time! :D


#1

http://fiverr.com/alonercro/create-you-a-realistic-3d-text



The first 3 comments will receive a free picture. :slight_smile:



And if you collect my gig i will collect all yours,just leave comment below.



Thank you.


#2

Here you go:

I noticed a few problems with the content:



I will design a realistic 3D text for your business or personal use in shortest possible time.And of course i offer unlimited revision,until you are not satisfied my work is not done! :slight_smile:



Try this instead:

I will design a realistic 3D text for your business or personal use in the shortest possible time and of course, I offer unlimited revision until you are satisfied my work is done :slight_smile:



Also in your gig extras you use the words All Together try “Altogether” instead.



I hope this helps



P.S. I have just started a new thread where if you want me to correct or edit your content I will (free). Just go to that thread & message me there or comment there anyway:

http://forum.fiverr.com/discussion/7561/the-think-tank-thread-for-anything-to-do-with-writing-or-what-to-write-or-what-not-to-write-tips#Item_2



I need that thread bumped back into this page 1, thanks.


#3

I would love a 3D picture if you’re still offering them! I can message you privately about the design if you like?

Maybe you could consider adding a little bit more detail in the explanation of your GIG. Give a bit mire depth about what you can do, and your experience. (On your 3D text GIG).



Also, if you are finding that you are not getting any orders on a few of your GIGS then take them down temporarily and just focus on your favourites.



Let me know about that image!



#4

Reply to @rossonomous:

I contacted you. :slight_smile:

And thank you for advice. :smiley:


#5

Reply to @scriptwizard:

thank you for your help! :slight_smile:

i will change now my description and gig extras.


#6

Here you go:

I noticed a few problems with the content:



I will design a realistic 3D text for your business or personal use in shortest possible time.And of course i offer unlimited revision,until you are not satisfied my work is not done! :slight_smile:



Try this instead:

I will design a realistic 3D text for your business or personal use in the shortest possible time and of course, I offer unlimited revision until you are satisfied my work is done :slight_smile:



Also in your gig extras you use the words All Together try “Altogether” instead.



I hope this helps



P.S. I have just started a new thread where if you want me to correct or edit your content I will (free). Just go to that thread & message me there or comment there anyway:

http://forum.fiverr.com/discussion/7561/the-think-tank-thread-for-anything-to-do-with-writing-or-what-to-write-or-what-not-to-write-tips#Item_2



I need that thread bumped back into this page 1, thanks.


#7

I would love a 3D picture if you’re still offering them! I can message you privately about the design if you like?

Maybe you could consider adding a little bit more detail in the explanation of your GIG. Give a bit mire depth about what you can do, and your experience. (On your 3D text GIG).



Also, if you are finding that you are not getting any orders on a few of your GIGS then take them down temporarily and just focus on your favourites.



Let me know about that image!



#8

Reply to @rossonomous:

I contacted you. :slight_smile:

And thank you for advice. :smiley:


#9

Reply to @scriptwizard:

thank you for your help! :slight_smile:

i will change now my description and gig extras.