Please Critique

[wiscodad]

I’ve been the one critiquing peoples submissions for the last ten years and I need help now. I’m a 10+ year HR professional and after reading so many bad resumes I am trying to get into writing them. Please look over my info, tell me what you think.

I am thinking of adding a video as well, has anyone seen that help you grow?

https://www.fiverr.com/share/K31b9l

Thanks.

[imagination7413]

Welcome to the Fiverr forums.

Please see (DES) point 1:

Introduction– This is not a list on how to make gigs. This is for gigs that are already made that are under-performing, need an overhaul, or just need somewhere to start for self-evaluation/education. It does contain a few general-information bits, and can help during gig creation, but that is neither the focus nor the intent. For more information on any of the following sections or points, please see ‘Other Resources’ under (RRD) at the end of this post. Sections: (TCT) Title, Category, and…

Also, I’ve gathered a bunch of useful links in the (RRD) section, for more reading topics.

[wiscodad]

Welcome to the Fiverr forums.

Please see (DES) point 1:

Introduction– This is not a list on how to make gigs. This is for gigs that are already made that are under-performing, need an overhaul, or just need somewhere to start for self-evaluation/education. It does contain a few general-information bits, and can help during gig creation, but that is neither the focus nor the intent. For more information on any of the following sections or points, please see ‘Other Resources’ under (RRD) at the end of this post. Sections: (TCT) Title, Category, and…

Also, I’ve gathered a bunch of useful links in the (RRD) section, for more reading topics.

I believe that is what I have posted or is this a automated post?

[marinapomorac]

I believe that is what I have posted or is this a automated post?

Hey, let’s blow some minds

Maybe change this in to something more user friendly.

I will bet you anything people will say you offer 1500 words.

Type one instead of 1

[imagination7413]

I believe that is what I have posted or is this a automated post?

is this a automated post

It’s not automated, no, but it is in my usual response to the very frequently posted request: “Look at my me and tell me how to be better.” I did glance at your gigs and mentioned the first thing I noticed that you could improve on. I’m willing to provide a bit of help, nudge in the right direction, but I will NOT do your work for you.