Since I already had a look at your gig I figured I’ll throw in my 2 cents.
- get rid of those grammar mistakes
- add more images to your portfolio
- don’t overuse exclamation marks, especially when it comes with spelling mistakes ODER NOW!!!
- don’t promise “any photo editing service” with unlimited revisions. It sounds desperate and sooner or later you’ll get a buyer who will take advantage of this. Know your limitations and promote your strengths.
Other than that, stick around and work your a** off
For starters …
Spell “professionally” correctly
There are several grammar mistakes in your description of the gig.
Missing “of” a few times and some “ing” a few times.
Videos help your gig sell much better. Find a way to make a video to display your pictures and pricing. This boosts your rankings a LOT in the fiverr search engine.