Pls check my gigs

[mccain123]

Please can somebody help me out on my Fiverr gigs?
Actually I started working on Fiverr about a month ago and I have not received any order… I don’t really know what wrong… All I’m getting is massive, impression, Clicks, and views… No order

[blaisefaint]

Dear McCain123:

I took a look at your profile.

I suggest that you completely rewrite this:

I’m a talented intelligent person. My name is McCain and I have a lot of experience creating a lot of things… basically I’m a student… studying engineering. I’m not a guru, I’m just gifted and being myself… it’s no good being someone else!

Sincerely,
Blaise