Well, I couldn’t find any suitable examples for wedding magazines - it’s a niche market. Equally, though, the examples provided should give you an idea of the quality expected for professional wedding services, which is how you’re currently pricing your service.
You don’t need to be a brand to have a good sense of consistency. Maybe it’s a cultural thing, but I feel dull, luxurious colours are best suited to weddings – not cyan, yellow, red, blue and green.
If you honestly look at your sample and think “yep, this is good stuff”, then I’m afraid we’ll have to disagree.
When I look at your samples, especially the second one, I see:
- Text overlapping the focus point of the image
- A sea of unattractive, non-wedding related colours
- A mixture of completely random fonts
- Inconsistencies in text placement
With all of this in mind, I cannot see any customer paying $700 for the service.
So as to not sound too negative, I do think you have a market, especially considering your awesome description and wording. I just feel you need to work on some high-quality, consistent and attractive designs to attract customers.