hey there, can you please do check out my first gig and give honest reviews. Thanks.
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It takes a lot of work to make it as a freelancer, so be sure to research and plan accordingly.
“If you fail to plan, you are planning to fail.” (Attributed to Benjamin Franklin)
Specific to your gig, please see (IMG) point 2 and (DES) point 1:
There are also a bunch of useful links in the (RRD) section.
I really like that you’ve included lots of attractive examples of your work. That’s a big plus.
A couple of suggestions:
We’re not allowed to link to our Behance profiles. Your gig could get removed if you continue to do that. Flickr is allowed, however.
Your opening line isn’t particularly strong. In fact, it’s very cliched. It feels like a third of Fiverr uses some variation of the “then you’ve come to the right place” opener. I’ll be honest, my eyes start to glaze over whenever I see those words on this site. If you could find something more arresting to put in that spot, it could serve you better. Something to keep in mind, perhaps, as you get more comfortable on Fiverr.
Offering unlimited revisions isn’t the wisest idea. It seems to attract, on average, more people who don’t know what they want.