Suggestiongs to improve my Gig please!

[potsupotsupara]

Hi,
I’ve updated my main gig quite a bit, even adding a video. Is there anything else I can do to improve my chances of getting my first order sooner or is it just the waiting game?
https://www.fiverr.com/s2/6067ad9e3d

[antomtjvc]

Delivery times may be shorter, especially for the basic package.

Then please shorten them. (Especially for the first order)

Furthermore: The price. Make it 5$ [Only for the first order]

All in all: I like the gigs. Nice Niche. I think, after those improvements you won´t need to wait long for the first order.

Sincerely, Toni

[potsupotsupara]

Delivery times may be shorter, especially for the basic package.

Then please shorten them. (Especially for the first order)

Furthermore: The price. Make it 5$ [Only for the first order]

All in all: I like the gigs. Nice Niche. I think, after those improvements you won´t need to wait long for the first order.

Sincerely, Toni

hi!

thank you for the advice, that sounds like a great idea!! I’ve edited it accordingly

may I also ask, is the title/desc convincing enough? or do they need better keywords?